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Hyphen Nation

What’s the difference between a “little used car” and a “little-used car”? Between “more critical attacks” and “more-critical attacks”? Or, for that matter, between “toxic tort litigation” and “toxic-tort litigation”?

Friends don’t let friends worry about what modifies what. That’s why grammarians invented rules for multiword phrases known as “compound modifiers” or “phrasal adjectives.” In general, if two or more words modify another word and precede that word, hyphenate them. If you think this country has too many lawsuits, you may very well complain to your buddies about the “toxic tort litigation” that’s ruining the economy. But if you’re on the plaintiff’s side, you likely believe that “toxic-tort litigation” helps make us safer. No need to obsess here: if your meaning is obvious, don’t feel obliged to hyphenate. So “criminal law attorney” and “affirmative action plan” are fine as is.

Now you can understand why the boldfaced phrases are hyphenated in the following two sentences from a recent New Yorker article about defense spending:

The cliff-fall mandates an additional defense-budget reduction of fifty-five billion dollars annually.

The merchants-of-death argument explains only so much, as the political scientist Daniel Wirls observes in “Irrational Security: The Politics of Defense from Reagan to Obama.”1

And if you want legal models, consider these examples from a brief written by the Chief Justice, who is also known to be one of the profession’s Chief Grammarians:

John Roberts, Alaska v. EPA

  • state-issued permit
  • orange- and red-stained creekbeds
  • emissions-netting approach
  • site-specific conditions
  • four-wheel drive
  • then-current regulations
  • bright-line rule

One more thing: If your multiword phrase modifies another word but the first word in that phrase ends in -ly, there’s no need to hyphenate the phrase. Follow the Chief here, too:

John Roberts, Alaska v. EPA

  • critically important employer
  • potentially competing demands

1. Jill Lepore, “The Force: How Much Military Is Enough?The New Yorker, January 28, 2013.

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